New Author, New Book, New Review!
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A
new authors first release is always flawed. I don't think there is one
out there who has ever been completely content with their first. I see
this new author doing as many of us do and work on this again in the
future. But let us get to the review.
There
are many types of characters in this book. Many planets and worlds that
can be discovered in this series. It takes a real creative mind to come
up with the elements in this book and I think this book has huge
potential. I see errors in the editing process that can make things less
clearer for a reader but if worked on it can be so much more. A little
bit of configuring in some parts but I think the plot of the story was
still very strong. It was unique and captures the imagination.
Katie
is a young woman who has just graduated from college. The Deema,
Charles, is her secret love interest who she finally meets again. He was
friends with her parents and has been looking over her for years but he
hasn't seen her since growing up and when he does he is blown away. But
he is the queen's consort and she is not going to give him up easy. I
think this book might have focus a little too much on the queen and
could have paid a little more attention to the love story.
Although
this book has sexual content including masturbation, it does not go
into any graphic scenes with sex. If you are looking for steam this book
might not be right for you. Although it doesn't play into those roles
it does have what I consider some graphic language. I think it would
have played better with the two main characters coming together in the
end. Just because of the language and masturbation I think the reader
would like that in the end.
Overall, I would like to
give this story another try. I give it four stars because of the plot
and world-building but it does need work with editing. Still, I think it
is a great start for a new author.
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